Monday, 28 November 2011

November 28 2011 Xiox XD

     Hey guys, today what I have to say is. In class we were assigned the persuasive paragraph and the outline. So you have to write the paragraph and make in about 5-9 sentences. I wrote mine about why you should buy DDDN  fries. I wrote it so that it made you want to eat the fragrant, delicious, salty, and crispy fries. And on the outline you just write the topic sentence, 4-5 words that help describe your paragraph and then a sentence for each of them.
      I finished the paragraph pretty well and I understood what I was subposed to be doing. The only thing That I had a problem with was trying to make the buyer want to buy the fries more. And the purpose that we are doing this for is to be able to make people want to do something that you want them to do. So to convince somebody that your way or the thing your are selling is better than the others.

Wednesday, 23 November 2011

Ms.Lees Humanities 8 23/11/11

Today in Ms.Lees Humanities 8. We learned about narrative and descriptive paragraphs. We will be writing some shortly. We worked on our atlas work based on South America. And we went over how our blogging should be done. We managed to fit all these things in because we had a double block. My name is Yusuf S, have a nice day!